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I got some help with a friend on the HHN discord in rewriting this original fanmade house. Hope you like it, and post your thoughts.

Due to Sea World using the Sirens of the Sea name. The name of the house has to be changed to.
 

Sirens: Demons of the Deep

Location: Sprung Tent 2

 

“In the coast of the Northwest Pacific lies a beautiful beach house, harboring a deadly secret. And this Spring Break might also be your last.”

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Backstory: In the 1700s, there once lived a group of settlers in the Pacific Northwest who worshiped the Ancient Deities of the Sea. They lived a peaceful life, until the British Army came and stripped them of their land, forcing them to either serve them or die. When the settlers refused, the British began killing them all, leading to a massacre, with many forced to flee their home. Seeking revenge, the last remaining maidens prayed to the Deities of the Sea to help them reclaim their land. Their prayers were answered, but came at a terrible price. The maidens were stripped of their humanity, transformed into a series of demonic, flesh-eating mermaids. With their razor-sharp claws and jagged teeth, they tore through the British and wiped out every living creature. And though they had reclaimed their land, their newly aquatic bodies could not sustain themselves on shore, forcing them the flee into the nearby waters…

 

As the years and decades went by, and the old settlement was rediscovered and began to grow, a strange series of disappearances occurred along on the shores. People had claimed to have seen half human, half fish like beings roaming the beaches. Others swore they could hear singing in the night, beckoning them towards the seas…

 

In the modern day, the shores have become a popular beach area for tourists, with lavish beach houses for cheap. A group of college kids have made their way to the shore for the ultimate Spring Break experience… And they’ll soon discover the dangers that lurk just below…

 

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Facade/Queue: Guests enter the queue next to the MIB exit. As the guests round the corner, they see a large Beach House with a few cars parked out in front. On the 2nd floor, B-roll plays from the college students’ social media pages; It includes clips of two of the kids (Sam & Chrissy) looking to hook up, Jordan setting up for a massive house party, and Rebecca filming the ocean, where we see a strange creature appear from the ocean briefly. Guests will also hear audio of the ocean before a distant voice begins singing to them, ending with a demonic scream.


 

Entrance: Guests enter through the side patio door, making their way down a false outdoor patio. They head towards the Sprung Tent entrance on the left, where they’ll see blinking lights and hear loud music playing. Before they enter the Tent, a Mermaid pops out from behind the beach door.


 

The Living Room: Stepping inside the Tent, guests walk into the Living Room that has EDM music playing, with a small light shining bright colors on the walls. Several pieces of furniture are scattered around with huge claws marks in them, including the couch on the right side, several chairs and a table littered with beer bottles and cups. From behind the couch, one of the college kids (Chrissy) is seen limping around with the side of her hoodie torn up and a huge bite wound in her left side. She is heard calling out for the others, and as the guests move towards the end of the scene, a Mermaid is hiding behind a corner on the left.


 

The Kitchen: Turning right, and entering the Kitchen, guests will see another kid (Rebecca) lying on the center kitchen island. She is laying on her back with her stomach and chest ripped open. Standing over her is a bloodied Mermaid who proceeds to bite into her intestines as Rebecca begs her to stop before screaming in pain. The Mermaid will also swipe at Guests as they pass by.


 

Hallway/Stairs: Exiting left from the Kitchen, guests will pass by the stairs on the left side (indicating that they’ll be heading upstairs). We hear Chrissy calling for Sam, as Sam (actor) pops out of a small door beneath the stairs, searching for Chrissy.


 

Sam’s Bedroom: Entering the next room, we see a Bedroom that is slightly messy but relatively normal looking, with a large bed with white sheets on the left. Behind the bed are 2 corner closets and a cupboard. From the closet next to the bed, guests see Sam (actor) being attacked by a Mermaid (puppet), its arms wrapped around his body and attempting to bite into his face. Guests exit the room on the right.


 

Upstairs Hallway: Walking down a straight hallway filled with doors, guests make their way towards Jordan’s room. Sam continues to call out for Chrissy, while Chrissy responds faintly to follow her voice. As their dialogue ends, 2 doors on either side open and 2 Mermaids tag team the guests. They will turn left at the end of the hallway, where they can hear the sounds of someone being attacked.


 

Jordan’s Bedroom: Guests will walk in to find Jordan’s body lying chest down across the body, his head decapitated. Blood splattered across the room, the cabinets torn up with huge claw marks. Before exiting the room, a Mermaid pops down at guests from a hole in the ceiling.


 

Chrissy’s Bedroom: Inside the next room, guests will find a room covered with broken furniture; The bed is snapped in half, the closet doors have broken panels, and cabinets have giant claws marks on them. Clothing is scattered everywhere and the light is broken, dimming the lighting in the room. Sam pops out from behind the Bedroom door, covered in scratches and torn clothing. He calls out for Chrissy, more desperate than before.


 

Attic Stairs: In a short transition hallway, making a sharp left turn, guests will see the Attic Stairs have opened (indicating we’ll be climbing upstairs). Chrissy’s voice is faintly heard calling for Sam, sounding slightly more demonic.


 

Attic: Guests will find a fairly open Attic with small bits of furniture on either side, including bookshelves, chairs, a small table and a couch. A Mermaid on the left side floor will swipe at Guests just as they enter the room. Guests will walk straight towards a huge hole in the wall, with the mangled remains of Rebecca’s body sitting off to the left side of it, before making a right turn. Another Mermaid pops out on the right, holding Jordan’s severed head.


 

Gazebo/Cliffside: Guests will find themselves outside the house, passing by a Gazebo on the cliffside. Inside the gazebo are a small set of dimmed lights, illuminating a silhouette of what appears to be a woman (Chrissy). She is heard singing a song, drawing guests closer to her. Sam’s voice can be heard calling out for Chrissy, interrupting her song. Guests pass the Gazebo on the right, noticing a set of stairs (prop) leading down the cliffside. On the stairs is a shred of Chrissy’s hoodie. Guests will make a right turn.


 

Cavern Entrance: Guests will enter inside a huge cavernous entrance, finding themselves surrounded on each side with damp, rocky walls. As they progress through, the walls will have more blood splatters on them. On the floor, various pieces of Chrissy’s clothing and accessories are seen. Around different corners, various Mermaids will pop out. Just before entering the final room, Sam’s voice can heard letting out a scream.


 

Finale/Mermaid Grotto: In the final room, Guests will enter a huge cavern filled with large coral pieces and piles of skeletal remains. Guests make their way in a half circle around a large cliff in the center. On the right, atop another cliff, they will see Chrissy, fully transformed into a Mermaid and covered in blood, watching Guests walking below her as the other Mermaids pop out. Before exiting the house, guests will turn one last corner and see the mangled remains of Sam (actor) in his final moments. Half of his face and neck are missing, his clothes ripped to shreds. He reaches out for the guests before Mermaid Chrissy pops out to deliver the final scare.

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Mermaid Designs: The Mermaids’ designs will change as the house progresses. On land, they appear mostly human, with many of their features being on a smaller scale. When closer to the water, towards the end of the house, they appear larger and more fishlike. The Mermaids have varying degrees of scales on their bodies, ranging between green and blue hues with hints of purple and yellow. Their hands (and feet on occasion) are webbed, with either sharp fingernails or large claws. Their eyes will either have slight discoloring (for the land Mermaids) or have full blackened fish eyes (for the water Mermaids). Their teeth are all jagged and razor sharp, with some mimicking a shark’s mouth or an anglerfish’s mouth. Each Mermaid has a slightly different feature, whether it’s a pair of gills on their neck, fins on their arms, or even a large shark fin on their back. 

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I love it! The queue will help the guests keep the characters straight, and explains the lore well. My only suggestion is to maybe tone down the teeth in the mermaids’ design to avoid making them look too similar to the Nightingales.

 

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On 8/26/2022 at 10:26 PM, FierWryter said:

I love it! The queue will help the guests keep the characters straight, and explains the lore well. My only suggestion is to maybe tone down the teeth in the mermaids’ design to avoid making them look too similar to the Nightingales.

 

Seeing the comparison of the nightingale’s teeth, and angular fish teeth I see your point. Since the mermaids need to have fang like teeth from a aquatic creature that eats flesh do you have any suggestions of which teeth they would have?

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1 hour ago, Psycho_Bates said:

Seeing the comparison of the nightingale’s teeth, and angular fish teeth I see your point. Since the mermaids need to have fang like teeth from a aquatic creature that eats flesh do you have any suggestions of which teeth they would have?

Maybe rectangular, but very long? Not very aquatic, but more humanoid to go with those features, which could be more jarring. There was this book from my childhood with scary stories for early readers, including one called The Teeth, and that image stuck with me (of course it was Alvin Schwartz). https://images.app.goo.gl/JBg2fNkY7xkAFxiD6

 

Of course aiming for aquatic, you could give them something similar to long seals’ tusks, but much less blunt.

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Well seeing the tusks it kinda doesn’t work no offense since the mermaid’s teeth could rip a human flesh apart closes being a great white shark. I could do a mix of the teeth from the story, and the fangs of a great white shark.

 

In head canon Chrissy is related to Nancy from Graveyard Games.

 

I also made a new house as well.

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