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  1. Raymond stepped in the cold damp room and walked as if he was floating on thin air and had a smile that would send chills down any insane person back. Andrea soon follows Raymond and held her arms close to her as she was cold, but also she was scared for her safety.

    “Welcome to my office at Whispering Pines Sanatorium, now please have a sit Andrea as I look for something”, said Raymond as he look through the drawers.

    Andrea did what Raymond told her to it, it almost seem liked he had a hepatize her into doing it. She soon realized his voice was changing, it was still monotone a tad bit but it was getting more cheerful. Andrea then looked around at her surroundings; the office had a red glow to it, due to a red lampshade that was used to cover the lamp. The desk was massive, in her eyes, it looked five feet long, and it appeared to be made of solid oak. The desk featured many carvings; mostly skeletal features’ like bones, feet, and a skull. Behind the desk stood two bookcases filled with miscellious medical books. On the other hand, between the two bookcases stood a glass display case and in it were spinal cords of all shapes and sizes.

    Before she could get make out the names inscribed into the brass base Raymond let out “Its’ Showtime!”

    “Come on Andrea its now time for you to see what I do in my spare time”, said Raymond as he sounded like a kid locked in a toy story overnight with no supervision.

    Andrea followed him down a dark hallway that had rooms on either side. When she looked in she can see there were empty and the only source of light was coming from the moon. Raymond soon came to the room at the end of the hall it appeared to be an old emergency room at one time. Except in this day and age it would not pass health codes, due to the walls were covered in mold and the title floor was so dirty it would take a week to get all the stains up. It was then Andrea herd a familiar voice, it was Rebecca and Andrea could see she was strapped down on a stainless steel operating table.

    “Raymond, you let me go now you son of a bitch”, said Andrea as her face turned red due to she was angry.

    “Umm excuse me, did you just curse?” said in a way a parent would question there kid if they cursed for the first time.

    “Damn right I did, now let me go and report your ass to the cops”, said Andrea as she used all her strength to break herself free.

    “Oh you cursed again, so that means now you owe me fifty cents”, said Raymond as he held his hands behind his back as he was hiding something.

    “Fuck you!” said Rebecca as she spitted at Raymond but missed his face by a mile

    “BAM!” said Raymond, as he did not miss a beat and struck Rebecca kneecap with a wooden mallet.

    Rebecca let out a loud scream, as she was not expecting it, nor did Andrea as she stood in the corner shaking.

    “What the hell was that for?” said Rebecca as she started to cry. The tears soon dripped to the floor like rain drops.

    “Cause I felt like it”, said Raymond as he stuck the other kneecap like a baseball player just hit a ball causing a homerun.

    Rebecca now scared for her life let out a loud scream only to realize nobody would come to her rescue.

    “Will you please be quiet? I’m trying to concentrate”, said Raymond as he pulled out a handkerchief from his pocket. He rolled it up and placed it in Rebecca mouth.

    “Andrea, come here please and join me. I’ll guaranteed your going to have a lot of fun”, said Raymond who was still smiling.

    Andrea did not know what to do, part of her wanted to run home and not see this man again. Yet the other half wanted to know more about this man because he no longer was a stiff doctor with a limp in his step. Nevertheless, she chooses to step forward into the light and saw the bone fragments sticking out of Rebecca skin.

    “That’s my girl, now I know I made the right choice“, said Raymond.

    “What choice?” said Andrea as she sounded like a kid who just was told they have to perform a speech in front of the whole school.

    “Well from this moment on your going to be my new head nurse”, said Raymond as he started to clap his hands.

    “Thank you sir, I’m honor. But why me?” said Andrea as she was lost for words.

    “Now as head nurse you can help me with my newest patient”, said Raymond who acted, as he did not hear Andrea question and now went back to looking at Rebecca. Who was now blacked out due to all the pain she indoor within the last few minutes. “Hmmm I got an idea”

    “What is your idea sir?” said Andrea, as she was feeling a little more comfortable around Raymond.

    “Will I want you to take scissors off the plate and cut Rebecca tongue out”, said Raymond as he uncover the plate and the chrome medical instruments sparkled to life.

    “Umm ok whatever you say sir”, said Andrea who still felt hepatize by Raymond and grabbed the shinny scissor.

    Raymond then proceeds to take the handkerchief out of Rebecca mouth and tossed it to the floor.

    “Are you ready Nurse Andrea?” said Raymond as he held Rebecca tongue out of her mouth.

    “Sure am sir!” said Andrea as she now had a smile on face that looks like any typical person would have after there first kiss.

  2. I really think UO is going to cough up the extra money and make the permits secret.. Like have it where there made public after the event. I did see (what looked like TJ) load some blueprints in the back of a car a few weeks ago, I also herd construction starts less then 2wks from now and prop construction already started.

  3. Not to be a party pooper, and no offence to those who think it is awesome but A SAW house would confirm that Universal is shying away from "The Art of the Scare" and looking more to "The Art Of The Show'

    Such a shame too as HHN has always been about the scare to me. With several of the houses and Zones that have been at the past few events that were geared to visuals and PHOTO OPS, I can honestly say HHN is loosing in the Scare game.

    I think the days of guests running out of the houses in fear is going to die a slow, painful death.

    I agree 100%

  4. Just like a famous Marvel Super Hero was "ripped off" from a certain Universal monster. Everyone borrows from each other, nothing is truly original.

    I thought you said house construction started in December? :rolleyes:

    Im not the one that said construction starts in Dec, it was Roddy remember.

  5. CD some good ideas but take this for some insights... Some of the budget cuts on the table right now is to maybe make ET seasonal.. So they can build house in there right after the summer season cause ET already closed at night for HHN. Granted people might want to see the ride during the day but ehh I dont think the demend is there like in the past.

    They could make Jason the icon and make his apperance known like you said.. Hell they can do a Jason takes Manhattan style in NY.

    Also on a side note A&D likes to foreshadow a lot and I saw a lot of HHN 15 refences

  6. I still remember the final night where some fanboys were talking to TJ by JAWS and I come up. Well TJ goes "Hey Charles" and the fanboys mouths just dropped to the floor when they saw that. Almost like they were going "Holy shit Dr. Holmes knows him". It was the best sight in the world lol.. later on at the meet up again when TJ walked in the room and Roddy went "Its TJ", TJ went "Its Roddy" and then Roddy said "Its Charles!"

    I had the final night but at the same time I didnt.. I still miss the fact I cant be part of that wonderful team but its ok (I suppose).

    Anyways the next part I'm going to say isnt going on the vault boards or I'll get my ass chewed out (like I did last week)

    UO is doing a lot of budget cuts lately and its effecting the park in many many ways.. some for the best and some for the worse. This yr HHN of course will be effected in many ways and when you think about it they (UO and A&D) know how to save money.

    One way they did it was only one house had a que video, while the others didnt.. Que videos cost a bit of money to produce, so they took that money and spent it somewhere else.

    Second, the back part of UO had SZ but they wasnt special... Hollywood, Central Park, and Sherkton had nice stuff.. but NY and SF had nothing. The most expensive thing in NY was the hearses. While in SF had to be the gas for the CDT.. hell in MIB area they had nothing.

    The third way was to take all the interactive on the site and put it into the hands of the fans.. the only interactive this yr was the case files and dont get me there were cool but it could have better. Look at the inteactive on the 15 site its amazing what they did. So LT was everybody answer for interactive and people had a blast.. I somewhat did.

    Theres more to this but thats three ways on how they stretch there budget. Hell lets say they do the classic monster icons this yr they dont have to pay any rights to anybody (like they did for Bloody Mary and NLC). So either CD is right and they will use JACK to showcase them or they will let the icons have the park to themselves with no help aka the director.

    Also before I finish this short but sweet rant, I want some original houses again.. no sequels, no remakes.. just orginal houses.. like they could have done the BC house last yr without the gentleman. They only used them cause the fan boys wanted to see them one last time.

  7. Oh I cant wait to hang out with you CD at the event.. U will scareactors lol. Its none of my business why you decided to leave the scareactors but as long as you stay a big fan I'm happy.

    I think where going to have 8 houses for a while, and the houses right now are already detailed enough.. there so detail the scene team doesnt know where to put boo holes. Hense why theres been more and more atosmphere.

  8. Had some interesting table mates at lunch today. Look for construction to begin middle to the end of May. Oh and you can check out my table mates website HERE!

    Cool beans but I herd from Nancy that construction might start in March :) Who knows but they are starting early this yr then in yrs past.. Basicly right after Mardi Gras is over.

  9. Since it's safe in here to ask:

    What the heck's going on with the vault lately? I'm baffled at some of the stuff I've seen. It makes me sad. :(

    Every year the vault gets that way and it only gets worse every year.

    Just be glad theres other fan sites out there to fill in your HHN needs.. I know its the slow season and thats why I keep busy with other fan sites I belong to (Ghostbusters fan sites). Just ignore those ass holes who bring sites down cause they dont stay for long, I seen so many people come and go from the vault I lost count yrs ago.

  10. Should we mention Jack's brother? Wonder if he will be on the invite. It seems like it would be almost like a Sweet 16 type event.

    Nah lets not say Eddie, and I agree with it almost seems like a sweet 16 type event.. I want something original like going thru Mary's world or going to the Terra Queen world.

    We really dont need an anniversary yr til atleast 25.

  11. Hey everybody!

    I'm writing a new short story but at the moment I wont give to much away. So enjoy this early rough draft....

    A young man entered the living room with a determined look on his face as he held a box of Girl Scout cookies in one hand and in the other held a newspaper.

    “Today is the day I can feel it”, said the young man who sat down in a green chair that looked like it was made out of used carpet with duct tape holding it together.

    “John buddy ole pal you’re going to get a job”, said John as he open the box of Girl Scout cookies and place a handful in his mouth.

    John was 25 years old, around 5’10, green eyes, black hair, and a slim body, which was weird due to he lived off fast food. John had no life whatsoever, being unemployed for almost a year made him feel miserable almost everyday. Everyday he would wake up having feeling he will find a job and try to motive himself to keep looking. However, today will be the day he will always remember.

    “Hmmm lets see here, no cant do that, maybe, nah to far away”, said John as he skim the classified section. “What’s this? Wanted, a house sitter for an elder old woman who is going to visit her family in South Florida for a couple weeks. Well supply the house with food and pay up to $500. Call 555-1246 GOLDBERG”

    John picked up his cell phone, dials the number, and waited patiently to hear a voice on the other end.

    “Hi you reached I’m horny sex line…” with that John hit the end button. “Whoops must have dialed the wrong number; but I‘ll save it for later”, said John as his face turned red and try dialing the number again.

    The phones rang and by the third ring John herd a soft voice on the other line.

    “Hello?” said the soft voice

    “Hello; is this Ms. Goldberg?” said John who had his fingers crossed

    “Yes this is Ms. Goldberg. How may I help you?”

    “Hi Ms. Goldberg my name is John Levy and I’m calling in regards to the ad in the paper”

    “Ahh yes, I’m glad you call. You see I need to head to Florida within the next couple of days. My son Richard and his family moved down there a few months ago and I want to see them. I want to surprise my son Richard for his forty birthday. So do you want to stop by today to check out the place?”

    “Sure thing Ms. Goldberg I just need directions”, said John as grab a notebook off the living room table and wrote down the directions.

    John hanged up the phone and had a smile on his face that went from ear to ear. He then danced around the living room with the Girl Scout cookies box in his hand and pretending it was his girlfriend. He then dances to the bathroom to take a nice warm shower

  12. I agree Silva and I personality I dont get the fans lately... They wanted something new and we got it.. Now they want repeat houses or have houses based on SZ's

    A lot of vault head scares me.

    I would say why I think UO will do this but I will keep my mouth shut but one word comes to mind.... Roddy.

  13. Oh god they listen to the vaultheads saying they wanted Chance back cause she soooo coool... IMO she was a rip off of a famous character in the Batman Universe.

    So could the Universal classic Movie monsters be Chance guest and NLC could be Jack's guest?

    Oh I herd House construction is a go for a March start.

  14. So this topic will be updated throughout the up coming months with random sections of my story. Right now I will post a brand new section to my story follow by my introduction...

    "I’m late, I’m late for an important date”

    White Rabbit Alice in Wonderland (1952)

    Raymond sat in his office humming a tune that came on the radio as he wrote in a medical file. Then there was a light knock on the door.

    “Who is it?” Raymond asked as he placed the pen down and turned down the radio.

    “It’s Charles. May I come in?” said the young ambulance driver, who waited patiently a few seconds to hear a response.

    “Come in,” was the response. Raymond picked up the pen again and continued writing in the file.”

    Charles entered the office and placed his hand over his chest catching his breath. He had ran from the parking lot to Raymond’s office because he was close to an hour late.

    “Glad you can make it young man,” said Raymond. He didn’t even look up at Charles.

    "I’m so sorry that I’m late. There was some kind of back up on the 312. I will make it up to you; I’ll do anything you ask.” Charles took a seat in the chair across from the doctor.

    “Anything?” Raymond’s eyebrow raised in curiosity.

    “Yes sir, anything.” said Charles

    “First off your not in trouble for being late. It happens to all of us. Heck I was thirty minutes late today myself.” Raymond then continued in a voice that was notoriously monotone. “Just don’t let it happen again. Second your punishment, that you have volunteered yourself for, is to wash and wax both ambulances today.”

    “Sure thing sir,” said Charles in his more than usual exuberance. He then got up and walked toward the door. He suddenly remembered something before passing through it, berating himself for his thoughtlessness.

    “Oh before I forget. How was the funeral?”

    “It was good. Thank you for asking.” Raymond placed down the pen once again and looked up. “Thank you for your support, I really do appreciate it a lot. By the way you want to see what my dad left me?”

    “Sure thing,” said Charles as a smile came across his face. It was unusual for the doctor to share personal information. Much less to mention anything about his parents.

    "He left me this.” Raymond pulled out from under the desk what appeared to be a spinal cord. “Isn’t it pretty?”

    “Is that the real thing?” Charles had never paid attention to the medical diagrams, equipment, or models that were around the hospital. Although he thought this seemed a bit different than the others he’d seen.

    “This real? Nah, it’s a model. It was given to my parents by the doctor who treated me after the car accident. Dr. Peterson showed my parents where my pinched nerve was and where I had a slipped disk,” explained Raymond. He held a serious face and looked down at the object the whole time.

    “That is so cool. I bet it can go for a fortune on eBay,” said Charles in a sarcastic tone. “Well I must get to work, talk to you later sir.”

    “You do the same.” Raymond went back to the file he had been working on.

    An hour later Raymond closed the file and started to stand up. He had to go and talk to his staff.

    “I did not have you support when I needed it. Well, I have your support now. Don‘t I Dad?” Raymond touched the tip of the spinal cord and walked out of his office.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    A high-pitched, bloodcurdling, scream reverberated throughout the room. This was no ordinary scream; it was a scream as if somebody was in indescribable pain. All around the emergency room the staff stopped what they were doing and smiled as if the scream was like music to their ears. This unnerving scream came from the once lovely Samantha Lynn, who was now in the care of Dr. Raymond Holmes.

    Samantha could not move a muscle, her hands and feet tied down to the bed with thick leather restraints. All she could do was scream as Dr. Holmes bloodstained hands grabbed the flat black bolt cutters and placed them inside her blood-soaked torso. One after another, Dr. Holmes snapped each rib from her spine. The sound was like somebody cracking there knuckles, each snap blood squirted from her torso all over the table and Dr. Holmes. After a few moments of struggling, Dr. Holmes finally severed Samantha’s spinal cord from her head.

    The once screaming Samantha now lay at the table motionless as Dr. Holmes raised the backbone out of her bleeding remains. Dr. Holmes examined the backbone as blood trickled down each vertebra to form a large puddle of blood at his boots. Dr. Holmes acted like nothing terrible happened. Letting out a faint chuckle , a deranged smirk plays across Dr. Holmes face revealing his true emotions for a brief moment before quickly disappearing once again to form a hard straight line.

    So why does Dr. Holmes perform these ghastly operations on innocent people? Underneath the cool and collected exterior of Dr. Holmes there lays a man who is filled with rage, horror, madness, and is ultimately a psychopath to the extreme. Most people don’t live long enough to find out what makes Dr. Holmes the man he is today. However, there are a few who have survived that know Dr. Holmes’ madness goes back to his teenage days.

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