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Rough draft for god and apprentices idea (soon to be deleted)


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Will provide a higher quality version later.

 

Since the Dawn of time, love, peace, and tranquility coexisted with hatred, war, and fear. These manifested into two gods but for now let’s talk about the dark half.


The “Dark God” represented the negative side of life and throughout the centuries has worked to maintain their hold throughout not only the world but the whole universe.

 

For some reason, he took two apprentices, a brother and sister, to use for his dark and insidious plans. The brother studied deeply into the works of the human mind, specifically that of fear and terror. Through the brother, the dark god instructed him the means of how to inflict it on other living beings. The sister was mildly interested in strife and chaos and the Dark Lord amplified her enthusiasm for it. The sister throughout centuries incited several incidents where disarray and dementia ruled supreme. 

 

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V2 of the idea. Still not finished. 

 

Since the Dawn of time, love, peace, and tranquility coexisted with hatred, war, and fear. These manifested into two gods but for now let’s talk about the dark half.


The “Dark God” represented the negative side of life and throughout the centuries has worked to maintain their hold throughout not only the world but the whole universe.

 

The dark god enlisted agents throughout time to keep the balance of darkness within their grasp. One day or night, a brother and sister walked down a lonely road hand by hand, the people able to take care of them having been gone. The dark god approached them and invited them to stay in their realm, while suspicious the siblings felt they had no choice and agreed. 

 

While under the dark god’s tutelage, the brother and sister were taught about the ways of darkness, both becoming their apprentices. The brother studied the inner workings of the human mind, specifically those of negative thoughts like hatred, fear, and pain. With the dark god’s help, the brother gained multiple victims to test and study these dark thoughts. The sister meanwhile studied the workings of bodies, both their outside looks and the inner workings. She too received plenty of “participants”, but of the physical(ly violent) testings as opposed to the psychological. 
 

They eventually became true literal monsters. The brother Tabunsunce used the powers of the Sun which reflected his volatile and highly emotional state, while the sister Kosongmond used the powers of the Moon which reflected her aloof nature.

 

(Tabansunce is a combo of Somali and Bosnian words, while Kosongmond is an combo of Malay and German words). 

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